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Honest Opinions - Lingerie Advertisment
Replies: 13 — Last Post Jan. 7, 2007 3:20pm by Anonymous
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vuiL82cCDj0

This is an advert I made to promote a collection of lingerie I'm working on for The Sims 2.

What do you think?

Be honest. But SOMEWHAT constructive!

1:29 pm on Jan. 7, 2007
purplefrenchfry


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I likey.
The effects were really cool.


EDIT: For criticism..maybe make it just a tad bit longer?
I mean..don't go making it like 5 minutes long..maybe up to 25 seconds instead of 16

Post edited at 1:30 pm on Jan. 7, 2007 by purplefrenchfry

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Cool effects!

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Where was the lingerie?

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same as purplefrenchfry

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Neat! The only thing I don't like is the font, and the fact that it's not obvious it's for a collection of lingerie.

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yeah good point...i dont get lingerie or even the sims 2? all i see is random artwork. i like it tho.

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Quote: from big mac at 9:31 pm on Jan. 7, 2007
Where was the lingerie?

This is just a teaser, the lingerie will appear in subsequent advertisements.

I've actually got one made already, but I don't know where the fuck it is on my PC, so I'll have a look!

1:33 pm on Jan. 7, 2007
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Quote: from big mac at 10:31 pm on Jan. 7, 2007
Where was the lingerie?

That was my only complaint.  It was very nicely done, though.

Man, I miss that game.  Good freakin' game.

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Quote: from xrockMYworldx789 at 9:33 pm on Jan. 7, 2007
yeah good point...i dont get lingerie or even the sims 2? all i see is random artwork. i like it tho.

The footage is all from The Sims 2, with funky effects.

1:34 pm on Jan. 7, 2007
big mac

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If your going to do an lingerie advert, even a teaser.

Include some of the product your advertising.

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I think that it should be longer, but I think that it was quite good. I think that maybe there should have been some ligerie. Maybe, if you haven't already, and you don't want to show lingerie, you could show parts of it, but not enough for the person watching it to work out that it's ligerie, maybe just the pattern.
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This advertisement was made prior to you guys commenting. So just to let you know, none of your suggestions were taken on board in its making:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=48Cp43MhWCs

I thought I'd just throw it out there.

I'm working on another one using your suggestions and I'll upload that when it's done.

3:20 pm on Jan. 7, 2007
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