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need you to proofread my site/webcomic...
Replies: 9 — Last Post Feb. 29 4:11am by techiejunk
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Ok, I made a webcomic, and I need someone to please, please proofread the grammar for me. Despite what it says on the front page, the "about us" link works. If you see a mistake, please message me or post it, you will suddenly become cool. Don't proofread the comics themselves, because I am not going to really fix images.  Also the styles don't carry over to the comics themselves yet, so don't panic about that.

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Breakboy

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Is also Russian, less is known about her then is about C.H.A.R.

Then should be than.

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It looks like you're trying to copy Cyanide & Happiness.

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Breakboy

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Insane, random, knows karate, also is known for killing people, mainly Tony.

Not 100% if what you said is gramatically correct, but I believe "is" and "also" should be switched around.

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never saw that comic, lol,  but wanna post a link? I'll change the layout

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Oh, and thanks, I'll fix that

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Quote: from Breakboy at 6:00 pm on Feb. 28, 2008
Is also Russian, less is known about her then is about C.H.A.R.

Then should be than.

Actually, I'd also make it say, "Less is known about her than is known about C.H.A.R."

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Quote: from lordofallyou at 6:03 pm on Feb. 28, 2008
never saw that comic, lol,  but wanna post a link? I'll change the layout

Don't worry, it's no C&H ripoff.

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Has potential, keep it up.

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techiejunk

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Holy shit that sucked.

None of your links work, they all go back to your host. You posted the same news twice...
and, there is a shitty design...

Post edited at 4:46 am on Feb. 29, 2008 by bighead1991

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