Yeah, so I've been working on a song, influenced by Hole and Placebo (a little). Bear in mind that this is the first draft... be kind. Also, suggest a title... I'm stumped. Always the bridesmaid, never the bride.
I would rather be the red queen,
Not shrouded in white.
Maybe I'm lying, maybe I'm just free
I won't be bought or sold,
I won't compromise what's me
(I can be bought with a soul
Come and compromise me)
Always the bridesmaid, never the bride
Stuck inside the candy colours,
So sweet they rot my teeth.
Stuck inside the candy colours,
Acidic, paralyzing me.
Swig from a flask inside your coat
Oh I feel so tall,
I'm so high I can't get down
(Make me larger, make me small
We'll desecrate this neon town)
Always the bridesmaid, never the bride
Stuck inside the candy colours,
So sweet they rot my teeth.
Stuck inside the candy colours,
Acidic, paralyzing me.
I take a bite of wedding cake,
My teeth fall out,
Blood on the ground.
(Blood on pearls
Don't make a sound)
Always the bridesmaid, never the bride
Stuck inside the candy colours,
So sweet they rot my teeth.
Stuck inside the candy colours,
Acidic, paralyzing me.
Maybe I just shouldn't wish,
Call me morbid and disturbed.
But I was never yours,
And all your purpose you have served.
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I'll give you my body
If you sell me your soul...
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You're an amazing writer, and this is coming from someone who has never done anything but troll/criticize this kind of shit on LW. 
