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My poem to GOD (Please Read)
Replies: 27Last Post July 11 9:51pm by iwantcandy
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Quote: from bluskypeChris at 1:57 pm on July 6, 2008

Quote: from hanie at 10:54 am on July 6, 2008

Maybe if you stopped blaming all your problems on 'God' and started to take resposibilty for your life you wouldnt be so unhappy.

Some people just don't understand what I go through: Bullying, racism, ridicule, exclusion, unwanted, friendless.


yea, im pretty sure everyone on this site goes through at least 3 of those every day, youre nothing special

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my mom hit me with quotes from the bible
i catch em, go outside and hope for survival

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Quote: from Skip at 10:55 am on July 6, 2008

Quote: from bluskypeChris at 1:54 pm on July 6, 2008

Quote: from Skip at 10:50 am on July 6, 2008

way too emo
 

 This is what society has become, stupid ignorant people you have created.  

 A poem so serious, that people calling me emo.  Who have no clue what I go through my life.  There are people who are hurt throughout the world, how are they EMO?  Does anyone really want to be emo, why would anyone want to feel hurt?  I am not emo, I am hurt and if you live my life you would be too.  God, you let people like this guy or girl to live, and you gave them a life of happiness.  Curse you god, these people should have die already.


you have no idea what poetry is do you.  it's not supposed to be emo shite like this.  this could easily be a diary entry instead, and that would just save you from all the humility

You call yourself a support leader, yet you do not know a dime about the life of those who are less unfortunate then you are.

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Maybe if you stopped blaming all your problems on 'God' and started to take resposibilty for your life you wouldnt be so unhappy.

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Quote: from bluskypeChris at 1:58 pm on July 6, 2008

Quote: from Skip at 10:55 am on July 6, 2008

Quote: from bluskypeChris at 1:54 pm on July 6, 2008

Quote: from Skip at 10:50 am on July 6, 2008

way too emo
 

  This is what society has become, stupid ignorant people you have created.  

  A poem so serious, that people calling me emo.  Who have no clue what I go through my life.  There are people who are hurt throughout the world, how are they EMO?  Does anyone really want to be emo, why would anyone want to feel hurt?  I am not emo, I am hurt and if you live my life you would be too.  God, you let people like this guy or girl to live, and you gave them a life of happiness.  Curse you god, these people should have die already.


you have no idea what poetry is do you.  it's not supposed to be emo shite like this.  this could easily be a diary entry instead, and that would just save you from all the humility

You call yourself a support leader, yet you do not know a dime about the life of those who are less unfortunate then you are.


Look, i am not judging your problems and i am not criticizing your life.  This is the POETRY forum, i am critiquing your POEM, not your PROBLEMS.  Your poem is shit end of story.  Write a diary instead

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It was fine

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Talk to yourself and you'll hear what you want to hear.

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I fucking love it :) lol
i don't know why everyone else is dissing it... i think it's fucking awesome!!

well fucking done :)

x

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Quote: from bluskypeChris at 10:57 am on July 6, 2008

Quote: from hanie at 10:54 am on July 6, 2008

Maybe if you stopped blaming all your problems on 'God' and started to take resposibilty for your life you wouldnt be so unhappy.

Some people just don't understand what I go through: Bullying, racism, ridicule, exclusion, unwanted, friendless.


Everyone has there own bag of shit in thier lives, in fact if you can find me one person that hasnt had something bad happen to them in the last year i will take it all back. but honestly, will you? If YOUR unhappy, who can change that? YOU! insted of moaning about having no friends, go and make some!! ive been bullied, called names, been exculded. everyone at some point in there life has been through it, so dont tell me that i dont know what your going through, everyone in the world has had there taste of crap. but the difference between you and me is that i deal with it, and make a difference to myself, not moan that im alive, but make a better life for myself!!!


and how dare you say that the person that called you Emo shudnt be alive, who the fuck are you to decied if people should live or not.


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i don't know about anyone else, but that just made me laugh

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i'm nt a bible pusher bt id relel like it wen ppl refer to god as a son of a bitch

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Quote: from liferocks at 11:02 am on July 6, 2008

i don't know about anyone else, but that just made me laugh

ditto

sure, i didn't like it because it disrespected what i liked. but i understand how you feel, or at least i used to.
but that aside, there was no real form that made it great
things didn't lead from one thing into another
if you tried to work on it as a poem instead of an anger rant it could have been better.

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tbh this is absolutely ridiculous.

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tbh this is absolutely ridiculous. God doesnt force anyone. If you were forced it was probably by your parents.

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gahhh!
be nice to god!

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