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love poem (for my gf)

Replies: 8 — Last Post Sep. 6, 2008 9:31pm by trulyjenny

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( Shwinky1992 )

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i would swim across the widest ocean
i would try to reach the sky
jus for a small moment
to see you
and ur pair of beutiful blue eyes
i would climb the tallest mountain
id fight the strongest man
i would tear myself apart limb from limb
if thats what it would take
to see u ever again
id stay on the phone with you
if your scared and cannot sleep
i would jump off a cliff to save you
no matter how high
no matter how steep
id sit on the phone with you all night
if you cannot get to bed
i would spend all day taking care of you
if you were sick and had pain in your head
id do all these things
not for somthing in return
but so i can me with you much much more
bacause baby
i really really love you
and u are the one that i so much adore
id take on an army
id steal you the stars
i would save all my life
jus to get u ur dream car
to see you smile
id go through so much pain
but it would be worth it
because u would know that i love you
yet again
i would blow up the moon
i would put out the sun
i would prove in any way
that i am the one...

yea there it is i dunno i dont think it is good id figure maybe i could get some feedback with my livewire family :D

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chaosdisown

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why don't you just say something simple, like i don't know, i love you.

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Most people pick petals off of flowers to tell if people love
them, i pick the leaves off of thornbushes so i'll never know.

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Heart92

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Awh, lovely poem.

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Starting a new oblivious. I'm nervous. knees shaking.
My own detention. inside, I fight. the bermuda triangle comes to life.
Trapped. Caged. Deranged. Mind carries you into another world,
Somewhere beyond the eye is a worl pool.

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hurriyah38

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awww how cute you know what a turn on is, is when it rhymes cause it's so cool and sweet!! But I still like it!!

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siddox3

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Quote: from chaosdisown at 9:03 pm on Sep. 6, 2008

why don't you just say something simple, like i don't know, i love you.

it's called a poem.

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radiohead

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I ENJOYED YOUR LITERARY WORK. DO NOT NOT WANT

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Googoie

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Quote: from chaosdisown at 12:03 am on Sep. 7, 2008

why don't you just say something simple, like i don't know, i love you.

I've tried that.

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chaosdisown

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Quote: from siddox3 at 9:05 pm on Sep. 6, 2008

Quote: from chaosdisown at 9:03 pm on Sep. 6, 2008
why don't you just say something simple, like i don't know, i love you.
it's called a poem.

its called a waste of time, because either way you'll still get the same reaction.

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Most people pick petals off of flowers to tell if people love
them, i pick the leaves off of thornbushes so i'll never know.

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trulyjenny

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Aww, that is really sweet. :)

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