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is this poem good?
Replies: 10Last Post Sep. 27 4:40am by cadetjones2011
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ok so I wrote this poem for  me and my boyfriend

"Far Away"
We may live far away
But we know that our love will always stay
You have stolen my heart
And it kills me the whole time we are apart
But just knowing how much you love me
You have set my soul free
Everyday I feel your pain
And I know it's the worst kind of stain
But just know that you will always be a part of me
So can't you see
All I ever needed was you
I know you are true
And will never turn my world to blue
I am so glad you are in my life
And one day we shall become husband and wife
And when that special day comes our hearts will finally intertwine
By:Jessica Jones


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Jessica Leann Jones & Benjamin David Scotty Forever


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xXxRiotxXx


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Cold fear
I know that your here
Don't lie to me
What the fuck did you think?
That I would forgive you?
Be your best friend?
Just go away
And let this shit end

That's the last poem I wrote.
And yes, I like yours.

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Like nothing you've ever seen


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HangEmHigh


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Awww that's really sweet =)

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I would have to hold the whole night sky in the palm of my hands.

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Wealthy Hobo
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Quote: from HangEmHigh at 10:39 am on Sep. 20, 2008

Awww that's really sweet =)
thanks

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Jessica Leann Jones & Benjamin David Scotty Forever

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Wealthy Hobo
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Quote: from xXxRiotxXx at 10:39 am on Sep. 20, 2008

Cold fear
I know that your here
Don't lie to me
What the fuck did you think?
That I would forgive you?
Be your best friend?
Just go away
And let this shit end

That's the last poem I wrote.  
And yes, I like yours.


thanks and your poem is good to

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Jessica Leann Jones & Benjamin David Scotty Forever

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breannafhchick06


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very nice

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sadnessness


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yeah its nice actually

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dont wonder why im not smiling, wonder why you are.

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Quote: from sadnessness at 10:56 am on Sep. 20, 2008

yeah its nice actually
thanks

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Any poem is good if it expresses feelings and you can understand or/and identify with them.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery and today is a gift!
That's why we call it PRESENT.

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Quote: from KathyN at 2:47 pm on Sep. 20, 2008

Any poem is good if it expresses feelings and you can understand or/and identify with them.
thanks

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Jessica Leann Jones & Benjamin David Scotty Forever

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Quote: from breannafhchick06 at 10:52 am on Sep. 20, 2008

very nice
thanks

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