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I wrote this sex scene introduction and I need some opinions. I tried to make it as realistic as possible. ------------------------------------------ "Thanks for minding the kids, Zerana," said Benatrisha, "I realise it's a schoolnight and everything. Skyler is on his cellphone outside. He'll pay you and drive you home. I'm heading to bed". "Goodnight, Mrs Lavertola!" Skyler came inside. "Thanks a bunch, Zerana. Here's a fifty" "Oh, that won't do at all" she smirked, pulling a baseball bat out from behind her back. "What the f-?" exclaimed Skyler before Zerana knocked him out with the bat. Zerana's boyfriends came out from behind the curtain. "Let's do this thing!" one of them said, pulling KY out of his pocket. Zerana, Malfasa, Triston and Derkola began stripping Skyler. ---------------------------------------------- So that's the lead-up to the sex. What do you think so far? Post edited at 7:34 am on Sep. 14, 2008 by Anonymous
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mikeyp123
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This sounds a little bit rapey.
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tick makes me tock.
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AlexxRawrr
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what the hell is with the weird names!
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dance or die
Why do i put myself in these situations.
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ReesesLuverx3
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um.... freaaakky freakkky.. sounds like some creepy soap opera
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originality is the art of concealing your sourves
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hotsaucii princess
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umm its alrght ina werd kinda raping way
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I feel like im on top of a moutain if anyone
trys to push me off and there will be hell to pay
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Mattie17
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those names must be fake
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guitar lover
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ummm... OO have you heard of quizzila or sumin idk how to spell it lots of good stories there check it out
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boys suck
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Rtheory
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Seriously... O____O
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:'Her tender lips, once, such a beautiful kiss;'!
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7:38 am on Sep. 14, 2008 | Joined July 2008 | 99 Days Active
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Firstly, you have got to stop with the names. Benatrisha? 
