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Okay, I might as well.
Replies: 12Last Post Sep. 14, 2008 7:20am by St Jimmy
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Well, nevermind guys. Apparently, it sucks.

Post edited at 7:14 am on Sep. 14, 2008 by Anonymous


7:08 am on Sep. 14, 2008
The Fantasy


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Stryker is an odd name.

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Permious

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"then you shall have me"

i stopped reading after that. jesus fucking christ

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Quote: from The Fantasy at 7:08 am on Sep. 14, 2008

Stryker is an odd name.

True.

That's not the point though, lol. Everything is subject to change at this point.

I just need to know whether or not I did well with the scene.


7:09 am on Sep. 14, 2008
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first and for most before i read any ferther TOO MUCH Stryker this alexa this stryker this alexa this

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Hot.

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IS FRENCH FOR: Screw all of you who want to correct me, :)

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Quote: from guitar lover at 7:10 am on Sep. 14, 2008

first and for most before i read any ferther TOO MUCH Stryker this alexa this stryker this alexa this

Alright. I can change that. What should I say instead? "He? She?"


7:11 am on Sep. 14, 2008
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Stryker is a stupid name.

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SpM

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Haha, "drinking in his six ridges"? Your word choice is bizarre and your writing is just awkward to read. No flow.

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still say there names and everything just not all the time like look at a book and see how much they say he or she cause i know they don't say the name all the time. but then don't use he she all the time you know?

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Rtheory


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It's okay [:

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don't give up now its good but you just need some few fix ups. don't give up :( pm me if you want some help i know i could help you

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Blah. I couldn't read it because you had CHANGED it

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